第478期英文写作擂台赛[2009年7月05日]

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第478期英文写作擂台赛 [2009年7月05日]

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大耳朵英语好喜爱

Shopping
  Shopping is favourite for females and so do me. i like going to malls during my spare time, though often back with nothing in hand.
  However, when i decide to buy clothes, bags, trousould or household must or something like that, i like comparision, i always go from one store to the other, and search the goods i aimed. but when i make a decision and decide to take, my action is quickly.
  Today is sunday,and i prepare to go to the department store to hunt a bag, so no more words, just conclude this passagers and set off.
  see you

zbsj

one night in BEIJING
I will never forget that journey .How i desire to travel ! But after my first visit to BEIJING i changed myself.I remembered that night i did't close my eyes because I stayde in a corner.I daren't to sleep .while other people fall asleep. That moment I thought a lot. I understood the sky won't fall pie.I regreted this trip ,mesnwhile  I told myself  everything should be on its own can not rely on others.Now looking back six years have gone by.I grow up.I have an idea that i will look for that corner if i go to Beijing again.After all it's my
first trip.I also remember a kind man give us some cartons.Though it's a bitter memory I regarded it as my first grow that i will never forget.Every time i recall this experience I remind myself Do what you want to do by yourself.

泡泡妍

           A trip to Mountain YunMeng
   Have you ever heard the mount YunMeng ,it is a cordillera that among MiYun and HuaiRou.Two months before,dad and me visit there.It is a memorible in my mind!
   The  cordillera  is a wild National forest park that attracted the people who like take a risk.The cuckoo
flowers,trees are so beautiful!The road is adventruous  but very funny!
   I like the mount YunMeng!

徙倚

A  Travel
  I still remember the travel in spring,we went there with all our classmates.This a time when only peach blossom and warm wind.We took off at 6 o'clock for free travel.After we arrived  we waited for the boat and unluckly  we caught a heavy rain .At last we all got into a big boat  and talked with each other happily .We visited the  animals  on the island and saw lots of  beautiful pictures .We also took many photos and saw a pair of new couple and their marriage.We rade bike(can hold three person on time) as well .Then we went back exhausted.

万恶的佩佩

first travel with my friends
i will naver forget those happy days that i went to QINGDAO with my friends,though we  didn't have comfortable room,air-conditioned train and the train behind schedule for 10 hours.i know all of us will keep it in mind forever.i remember every belly-worship night,riding bike running half of the country,ect.Now looking back 2  years have gone by,i'm aways missing my friends. how i wish we could travel again together! that's a amusing time.

-ｓmile.晴兲

a lonely journey.....

我的大学在人间

A unforgotten afternoon
   The summer holiday is coming, as many other students, I want to find something practice to experience society life. When my high school students said that whether I am willing to join them to open a Tutorial or not, and I joined without hesitation. So yesterday we took actions quickly.We have two groups,each one have two persons.We printed many pink advertising papers and they are very beautiful .We went to the small streets to post and release them to the pass-by ,besides advocated to them .Perhaps all of us were too eager and we walk miles of road and almost no one cry to tied.Perhaps we were working for ourselves and it is worthwhile. At this afternoon we understood earning money is a very difficult thing and at every corner the difficulties are waiting for you .I think we should cherish what we had and never waste money and time .What an unforgotten afternoon!

hongyu11111

my first trip to yellow mountain.
i lived in shandong province,so it took me more than ten hours to yellow mountain in a bus.but the result proved it's worthy.it goes an old saying if you have traveled five most famous moutain then you needn't to see a mountain again,but if you have traveled yellow mountain then you need't to see the rest four famous mountains in china.this saying draw a exactly conclusion that yellow mountain is the most beautiful mountain in the world.the terrible cliff,wired rocks,spring and unique pine trees leave a deep impression to me.organized by company,all of us are young man,so we determined to climb the mountain on foot.it's really a hard work and cost us more than three hours get to the summit of yellow mountain that had measure 1668 meters high.we strolled on the top of the mountain and wathing the glorious scenery which had only seen on tv or magazine.we stayed three days on the mountain and took hundreds of potos.we traveled a lot of preminent scene which have their own unique and meaningful name like"xianrenshaixue""xihai""lianhuafeng"and "welcoming pine tree".it's an exciting trip.i hope i can back to yellow mountain again in future.

star318

我写作太烂了~
我现在开始学习写作~~
忘大家多多指教~~

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第一次来 希望以后大家多多帮助

jerryqhc

First trip to the east grand canyon of zhengjiang
I remembered the day, July 1 ,2006. we went to  the east grand canyon of zhengjiang.I should go to there with strangers--my new colleges.It made me blue.
I lived in shanghai,so it took me more than six hours to the east grand canyon in a bus.but the result proved its worthy.
First we were arranged on a ship.I saw the out landscape by the window, the river is clear and strait, the mountain is high,the trees inthe mountain are more .The beautiful landscape made me joyful.In the sweltering summer,the clear river made us comfortable.
Second we should climb the front hill. we walked on step slowly.On the way to the Moon lake,we found many stones. By the stone's shape,people can find dulcet story.certainly there are some introduction on the  stone. On the step of the hill, I saw a bourn,which there were more little fish. I walked into it and felt very comfortable.
How a memorable trip!

zhouly

Shopping
As a young girl,I usually shopping with my friends.Usually we go out for shopping after we finish our examinations or just finish our tasks.So we can see many wonderful thinds,such as beautiful clothes、special shoes and so on.
Last week,I went shopping with my roommates as usual.During the shopping,we wanted to buy our dream handbags.But we can't find the proper bags,even if there were many bags.Do you agree that there are one thing belonging to you in desnity.So when we go shopping,only if we buy it ,it must fit on us.
And we can see so many things we want to buy,but we don't have enough money.So it also tells us we should buy thinds what we need indeed.

wujiang760927

A trip to huangguoshu waterfalls
Guiguoshu waterfall is very fauous in the world like thunder pass through ears ,have already dreamed it several times ,it is china first in the waterfall. And it is one of the admiration of somebody’s fame big waterfalls, the yellow fruit tree waterfall apart from the capital Guiyang 137 kilometers ,is located the west of Guiyang ,the falls drop 77 meters ,maximum width 101meters, the summerfall flood rises suddenly,waterfall like yellow river actually leans, the cliff trembles,transmit sounds from the bottom of valley like bang thunder,even if ten meters away from it,also can hear to its roaring ,as the result of formidable impulse,the mist which splashes my fill the air above several hundred meters,