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2008年7月15日第124期英文写作擂台赛

 

 

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本期题目: It Pays to Be Honest

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。
2.诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。

 

上期我们讲了从经验中学习的事情，这一期我们讲一下诚信的重要性。其实诚实是有回报的，长远来看，正是那些踏实勤奋，诚实上进的人最终取得了成功。希望大家能够结合自身的体会，好好地谈一下，谢谢！

 

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okweiok

          As society and economy develop, dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us. Manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make more profit. Doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients’ benefit. Students may cheat on exams for better scores. As a matter of fact, dishonesty has become so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty.
          However, it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself and to others. By being honest, manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers, which in the long run generates more profit. By telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions, doctors and nurses enhance their own credibility and honor their profession. By giving honest answers to questions, not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses, but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well. Therefore, it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be honest.

lika710

这是一篇观点论证型作文！

yexingtianya

Don't be shy, just try!

whywhat8

When a plenty of pseudo products were poured into markets, as the same time the dishonest phenomenons have also been produced more and more.We can see the products are described very usefull but in fact it proves faulse on TV. We can hear quantities of lies through kinds of communication. We can also find the children are able to lie with us.The examples like this have more. So the world has a belief crisis. In my view, to be a honest man is not only good for myself but also benefited for others.Only do we do is that we should have a honest behavior. Fof example, the children should tell honestly to their parents instead of lying; studens should finish all kinds of exams independence instead of cheating; the businessmen should rightly describe the usefull of products instead of exaggerative. In a word , the society will become a honest sociey through our efforts! Let's wait for the day!

 

哪有错误或者用词不当地方，请指教，谢谢

[ 本帖最后由 whywhat8 于 2008-7-15 09:22 编辑 ]

daniel2970

I do agree that if you are honest,you get a lot. For frankly, no one can be a hundred percnt honesty person, however, what we need is to behave ourselves in this money-central society. Be a trustful merchant providing high quality products, a honest student who won't cheat during an exam, an obligated citizine never ignore his responsibility. That's the way it is, a method we can do through our consciousnesses. Then, what will we get? Besides the those good material things, the most significant thing Respect. Don't feel guilty if you ever be a dishonest person, it is obviously that none can avoid cheating. No one dare say I have ever cheated. The only difference is that wnen we realize and start to change.When you change gradualy, you can feel you've already been paid and what's more, respects all around you. You deserve that.

hjh6953

honest is better than gold

yur1979

When we are a child,our parents and teather told us to be honest,which is our national good habit.Everyone ,for everything ,you should be honest to others,or you can not succed for ever.For example,in our near market ,there is a mercant,when the customs buy sth,he always give less than what should give,in the end ,no people went there,the police also punished him.In the society,honest is more important to our youger,there is a very long way to go,do you wish disliked by others?

irene18

参考参考

大耳朵19860223

大家都很积极啊~~o(∩_∩)o...哈哈

angelrong922

     Talk about the honest subject, felt seriousness. as quickly as the economy developing. honesty become dark.They are want to get a lot of money, benfited. They will use the way by fair means or fooul. In fact, I advice them "think twicebefore you act" I belive that"men proposes" If you do it, by and by , I think you will lost some good friends, maybe chance, maybe dishonesty change you all life. someone else never belive you, they will lose everything include themself. It was terrible thing.

 

    So when we were at students workers father or others, you must honest for everyone that onters would honest for you,The life is ture, So we should live in the ture world. The world is ture cleanly and the life is too.

 

    If you want have a wonderful life, you have to honest to everyone.

helen000

1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。 2.诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。 As a well-konw saying by Benjamin Franklin, the president of American, Honesty and diligence should be your eternal mates. Honesty is considered as one of the good virtues and it's one of tradtonal virtues in our long histroy. Since we were so yound that we all be told that children should be honest in our life. However, today, the phenomena of dishonesty are so widely in the every corner of the world. Some officers of local governments say some big words to the superior for their politic purpose, and conceal the actual facts. Not saying truth words for the ordinary people. In university or college, some professors plagiarize other paper and data for their interest. Students want to obtain a good grade in exam, also do some dishonest things. Businessman play unfair in the dealings for obtaining much money. In general, the dishonest phenomena exist in every fields of our society. It is my belief that "honesty is the best policy" in most situations. If we liet to others for our own advantage, it is sure to hurt us eventually. One day , the officers must be punished by their foolish behaviors. the professors also lose their famous and stadus. Once we become known for telling ties, we will lose the trust of others, and trust, once lost, is difficult to recover.

BLZBOBO

It Pays to Be Honest

It is a new world ,everyone be smart ,learn more things than some years ago ,but who also learn to no honest .

Such as my once exam ,there are some students who say their awer to their friends ,but teacher is not  know it .It should be a no honest thing .

The no honest thing seem it can very simple to do one thing ,but it is no a good useful to do things .Because it is trick ,it is no honest thing .

明-明

As society and economy develop, dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us. Manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make more profit. Doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients’ benefit. Students may cheat on exams for better scores. As a matter of fact, dishonesty has become so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty. However, it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself and to others. By being honest, manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers, which in the long run generates more profit. By telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions, doctors and nurses enhance their own credibility and honor their profession. By giving honest answers to questions, not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses, but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well. Therefore, it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be honest. The no honest thing seem it can very simple to do one thing ,but it is no a good useful to do things .Because it is trick ,it is no honest thing .

licancan

Nowerdays, there are more and more dishonest phenomenon in the society.Such as some merchants make illusive ads in order to attract more customers, some packman cheat buyers by giving short weight and even some students cheat in exam to gain high scores. All of these are disadvantage for the social development. In my opinion, honest is not only the basic ethics for a person but also an important element for social development. For one hand, honest is the radical principle of communication.Someone wants to be respected he must treat other people honest first.If you cheat people you'll be cheated too like the adage says give a person a dose of his own medicine. For another hand, be honest is not only good for others but also good for yourself. For a honest merchant he'll get more customers and for a honest student he can realize his fault and get really improvement. Anyhow the social development depends on human development, so all of us should be honest man.