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本主题由 韩萱 于 2008-7-14 08:30 解除置顶

2008年7月13日第122期英文写作擂台赛

2008713日第122期英文写作擂台赛

 

 

 点击此可以参与历次英语写作

 

2008713日第122期英文写作擂台赛,每天一期,敬请关注,按时参与。重在参与!

 

本期Free Writing

 

Please find the following message which adelayang006 sent to me days ago. I agree with him and the free writing will help us to imporve our english writing. So I decided we will do the "free writing" every Sunday from now on, you can write down everthing which you are interested in, maybe a article, maybe some sentences. Come on guys! We can do better!

 

The message from adelayang006;

Last semester, my writing teacher introduced a good method-free writing. He told us, free writing is a simple process that is the basis for other discovery techniques. Every time when class beginning, we have 5 minutes do free writing, we don’t need make corrections while writing. Writing down whatever comes into our mind. after 5 minutes writing. We are share everyone’s free writing. When I first wrote the free writing, I feel my brain was empty, I did not know how to write. I didn’t have any idea. After a few times, I understood how to write. I just write about whatever interests me, never care about those intricate writing skills but just preoccupy myself with actual writing. The purpose of my writing is to share my happiness and unhappiness. I just have to keep writing, even if I have write something like to write down or write whatever comes into my mind. Actually, I benefit a lot from this practice; even now, my writing is still free writing. After I touched this method, I couldn’t help myself to write a lot to fill my emptiness, whenever I found nothing interesting to do. I would open the computer, and put my fingers on the keyboard and then begin to click. I liked to see my thoughts emerging on the screen, by changing its form into letters.


 

相信看了上面的介绍,你应该知道如何来写这个“Free Writing”,我也希望能够通过这样的练习真正给我们提高的机会,也希望我们的会员不要放弃任何可以学习的机会,大家都知道一份耕耘一份收获!但是总有人在机会面前晃来晃去,不知如何下笔,那么现在你可以自由发挥了,珍惜机会,也珍惜自己,相信我们能够做的更好。让我们一起共勉。有什么特别的看法或建议,也欢迎发信息或者QQ给我。

 

Don't be shy, just try! 

 

截至时间:2008714日上午10点。

  

 志愿出题者:adelayang006

 招聘该活动的志愿者!

 

P.S. 感谢大家对我们栏目的支持和关心,为了能够更好地学习和提高我们的写作能力,我们找了一些有关写作的文章,希望大家能够认真地看看,能够从中得到一些帮助.当然有什么好的建议与想法,也可以与我们一起分享!

http://bbs.ebigear.com/thread-52330-1-1.html

分发右边宣传链接可赚金币:http://www.ebigear.com/bbsclick-53178-0.html

Yesterday,it was cloudy and not very hot,I led my son to botanic garden.It was lied in the west of the city.Surrounding there was fantastic.About 70% of its total was a huge lake,many boats were sightly floating on the lake.There were thousands of plants and verfied of flowers.We came to a place called rosary,broad stretches rose flowers were blooming,it was undertaking,I was under the illusion that I was strolling in a painting.Then we visited the science museum,there were some fine specimens of rocks and insects. We have seen a 4D movie ,it was active and irritative.In the afternoon,my son caught several fishes on the bank of the lake,it was his favorite hobby and he had a good time.

 

I am  very busy and time is limited,then we had a relaxation and enjoyed the free time,the feeling was beyond description.we had a delightful day,though we were exhausted when getting home.We had a meaningful weekend,for my son has achived much knowledge and information about insects and plants.



  • yangzhou 金钱 +35 very good! thank you and your support! "...caught several fishes on the bank of the lake,"?? 2008-7-13 09:19

Two-Day Weekend
      It is always a pleasure to make plans for the coming weekend with your family and friends. Just imagine you have two whole days ahead to be relaxed,you cannot help feeling excited.
    There are many interesting activities on weekends. You can go to the  beach, swimming freely like a fish and bathing in bright sunshine: or you can go to the country, walking in the pasture dotted with wild flowers, listening to bird singing. How romantic that can be! As an alternative, you can visit famous mountains, parks and historical sites; you can also enjoy sports and games; or you can stay at home and focus your attention on reading or listening to soft music for several hours at a stretch. After two days'active rest, you feel energetic and ready for hard work ahead.
    However, some people still waste their weekends. For example, they indulge themselves in vulgar activities such as gambling, playing cards or watching silly TV programs day and night, drinking heavily and sleeping for a whole day or fooling around in lousy places. Instead of having a nice weekend and being relaxed, they usually end up exhausted on Monday morning.
    I am wondering, after the two-day weekend becomes a routine in our life and loses its freshness, how many people can really enjoy the weekend and have a good time.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +40 very good! I wish you have agood weekend! 2008-7-13 09:21
Two-Day Weekend It is always a pleasure to make plans for the coming weekend with your family and friends. Just imagine you have two whole days ahead to be relaxed,you cannot help feeling excited. There are many interesting activities on weekends. You can go to the beach, swimming freely like a fish and bathing in bright sunshine: or you can go to the country, walking in the pasture dotted with wild flowers, listening to bird singing. How romantic that can be! As an alternative, you can visit famous mountains, parks and historical sites; you can also enjoy sports and games; or you can stay at home and focus your attention on reading or listening to soft music for several hours at a stretch. After two days'active rest, you feel energetic and ready for hard work ahead. However, some people still waste their weekends. For example, they indulge themselves in vulgar activities such as gambling, playing cards or watching silly TV programs day and night, drinking heavily and sleeping for a whole day or fooling around in lousy places. Instead of having a nice weekend and being relaxed, they usually end up exhausted on Monday morning.Yesterday,it was cloudy and not very hot,I led my son to botanic garden.It was lied in the west of the city.Surrounding there was fantastic.About 70% of its total was a huge lake,many boats were sightly floating on the lake.There were thousands of plants and verfied of flowers.We came to a place called rosary,broad stretches rose flowers were blooming,it was undertaking,I was under the illusion that I was strolling in a painting.Then we visited the science museum,there were some fine specimens of rocks and insects. We have seen a 4D movie ,it was active and irritative.In the afternoon,my son caught several fishes on the bank of the lake,it was his favorite hobby and he had a good time. I am very busy and time is limited,then we had a relaxation and enjoyed the free time,the feeling was beyond description.we had a delightful day,though we were exhausted when getting home.We had a meaningful weekend,for my son has achived much knowledge and information about insects and plants.
  • yangzhou 金钱 +1 Why? It's better for us to write ours. Maybe you can get somehing from the copying, but I think you can get more from your working! 2008-7-13 17:18
I live in the home of Ebigear for 22 days,in these days ,i have learned many knowledge from she.i am very glad ,my level of english is improveed everyday,i also want to do sth to thank you,but what can i do?
  • yangzhou 金钱 +10 You can do better if you comtinue to practise! Good luck! 2008-7-13 17:19

From yesterday, i study english again after it was interrupted some days. when i click the link www.bigear.com, i feel i am a littlte happy. i hope myself i can study english when and where, not only after i was defeated.

Will study three blocks: english to chinese, chinese to english & writing. i will not only study hard, but also learn it which i browse those details. and then copy these details to my blog.

Unconsciously, there years flew, i didn't go to work . now i maybe let the flower and smile make home my weary heart. My son will be sent to my mother. we should have own life. He should start his life although he is three years old. i think i want to a person whom is worth to be respected by him. then i can't stay at home with him. he go to school and i go to work.

which do i choose? to be a teacher or to be a inspector? i hardly decide now.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +20 it's very important that we shall happy in our living adn working! 2008-7-13 17:27

MY SUMMER HOLIDAY

    Now it's summer holiday!For every student it's the best time of the year ,at least I think so.I am always looking forward the arrival of the summer holiday !And this summer holiday has much more special meaning for me because I will be completely engaged in my study for the entrance gradute-examination.Im my view,if I can make good use of this time I will realize my dream in future!

   I am used to making a suitable plan before I begin a new task!Therefor at the beginning of the holiday ,I've written down my plan for study!

  • yangzhou 金钱 +20 Go on please! maybe we can share your happy as well! 2008-7-13 17:28

The Sellers' Complaint

I'm used to doing shopping online. Shopping online is really easy and fast. However, we often find some sellers are always complaining about the buyers' bargaining. They posted on lots of informations on the BBS to attack the buyers. I think that is not good way. Buyers' bcounter-offer to hope to buy a good bargain. This fits the psychology of each consumer. It's a normal behavior. As a seller, you must be patient and considerate to your customers. Because a seller is also a buyer.
  • yangzhou 金钱 +15 Take it easy! have a good weekend! 2008-7-13 17:30

I like dancing.

A few years ago, one of my friends told me that she has joined in a dance club, a kind of Latin Club. It make her life colorful. She is very enjoy it, whatever she is busy, she will dance with friends for a while. At the time, although I like dance, I can't believe why she is crazy about dancing.

Now I also joined in a dance club, I have been dancing it for 3 weeks. At first, I feel it's difficult for me. When I can dance a little, I am proud of myself. So, dance make me very happy and confident. I like it very much.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +18 very good! thank you and your support! 2008-7-13 17:34

Free writing

I think summer holidays is a long junior.As a matter of fact,I don't like holidays.

In summmer holidays,I can't see my friends.I can't  study well.I like my classmates and my teachers. I want to study with them.In my home,I don't like do anything.I sleep all day.I have no vitality.I don't like doing my homework,I don't like reading,I don't like my life.In my home,life is so boring.I 'm going crazy.

Maybe I must do some exercises,do some intersting things.I can sing songs,I can play computer,I can go shopping.But I can't do this.I'm a senior there student. I have to study hard.Because all the senior there students are fighting the clock preparing for the college entrance examinations.Only one chance, can I catch it?

I must make it.Ok,I have confidence to face the life.I must face the life, am I right? 

  • yangzhou 金钱 +25 How to choose your living? it's up to you! 2008-7-13 17:35

Recently, I am fond of the play Growing Pains, which is old but never easy to outdo.

I appreciate the father called Jason Seaver, because I think he is very honest to his children no matter how they behaved. He always treat himself like a friend of the children not only a parent.

What’s more , his attitude to his wife is another reason that I appreciate him. The couple always understand each other because the love for the whole family.

I think Growing Pains is really very good not only for studying English but also to enjoy a happy family life.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +20 I agree with you! Would you please introduce us more of your book? 2008-7-13 17:36
A ZA A ZA FIGHTING!!!

As the weather is too hot these days in Shanghai,My husband and I haven't play badminton.Yesterday the weather has cloudy and wind,so we decided to play badminton,I enjoyed sports to bring happiness.I lovely sports,just like badminton,running,basketball and so on. Sports brings special comfortable to me,it makes us forget unhappiness and strengthen our body.

 

It  is noon after we finished playing badminton,the weather more and more hotted and we were sweating like a pig.we went to maket after playing badminton,we had a bath before had a lunch,drinking a little red wine.what a comfortable and happy day!

  • yangzhou 金钱 +20 Looks fine! good weekend! 2008-7-13 17:37

Free writing

  In the free time to writing is sure of good idea. we are have to keep it on .

 

  everyday have to write a little.

 

  Just weekend I'll write a litte.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +8 in fact, you can do better! Just try! 2008-7-13 17:38
I am a college student! I am enjoying my summer holiday now. But in December I will take the GET4 exam. I am so nervous!!! I think I like English so much. I have enough time to prepare the exam. I believe practice makes perfect! So in summer holiday I will spend much more in studying English! Don’t be shy, just try! Let’s go go go !
  • yangzhou 金钱 +10 You can make it! 2008-7-13 17:38
i'll be the teacher of my sister this summer holiday.she is a very naughty girl,and don't like study at all.i want to impruve her study,but it's so difficult.the first proplem is that how can i make she interested in it.in fact,she is very smart,she likes do sports and play games on the internet.every time you call her to study ,she will make lots of excuse to refuse it.i'm very strict with her.i make a rule that make her read books .if she don't read books she can not play games.it's very useful by now,but i don't weather it will be useful in the future.anyway i will try my best to find a measure which is the most fit for her!
  • yangzhou 金钱 +20 I wish you and your younger sister both have a good holiday! 2008-7-13 17:39
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