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本期题目: How to make an apology

 

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition. You should write at least 120 words :

 

We all make mistakes in life. That's how we learn and grow as humans. The best way to learn how to do something right is to make mistakes while you try for yourself. Still, it's important to apologize when you are wrong, to admit your mistake so you can move on with your life.

 

上一期我们感受了初恋的热情与喜悦；也体会了人生的无常；总的来讲我们还是幸福快乐地生活着。在生活中，磕磕碰碰总是有的，还记得你是如何向你的朋友爱人道歉的吗？一个得体适合的歉意不光可以挽回别人的心，还可以为你们的生活增添一些不同的色彩。你有过这样的经历吗？你愿意与我们一起分享吗？

 

Don't be shy, just try! 

 

 

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[ 本帖最后由 yangzhou 于 2008-7-1 14:27 编辑 ]

kangshuo

                            How to make a apology

 During my work, I made a pology to a patient ,which gave me a impressive memory and made the importance of commuciation.Once, I changed a bed for a patient, she happened was not here.So I changed the bed by meself and had not made her belongs in order.For it was nearly twelve and it was time to go home,I was eager to go home and hurried to leave.In the afternoon, the patient found me and complainted that I made her objects in a mess.I didnot realized that I made a mistake until that time.I made a apology to the patient,I explained that I hadnot done well in my job and

I would correct later.I thought about the matter, if I had explained clearly,she has not been so angry at me.

This was my experience of making a apology,which made me understand the sense of patients,gave me a lesson.

可爱的毛毛

    Apology?You must kidding me.I do whatever I want to do and I don't care what any others' thought.I don't apologize to anyone before.aha,Just a joke.Don't mind me.

    I am a bit lazy,so I sometimes delay some works.My boss always asks me,how is your experiment?how are your papers?how is this?how is that?Although I feel so tired,I need to apolpgize for his forgive.

    Dear boss:

        I'm maomao.Please!Please read the letter to the end.Don't shut up the  computer.It has no fault.All are mine.Here,I am so sorry.About the experiment,I have prepared the specimen already,but the company hasn't sent me the reagent by now.I'll carry out the experiment as soon as possible and I believe I'll achieve the expected consequence.About the paper,Now I am reaching some related papers in English and try to translate them into Chinese.Once I finish it,I will send an E-mail to you at the first time.Trust me.Thank you for your listening.Don't be angry.Keep health and smile.

        Best wishes.

            Sincerely

                Maomao

    For this,my boss must forgive me,maybe he would do something to help me.aha,Wonderful!

[ 本帖最后由 可爱的毛毛 于 2008-7-1 11:28 编辑 ]

okweiok

Is there an apology you should’ve made, that you’ve been postponing? Make it this monday.

Apologizing at work is a hugely important skill. A well-timed, sincere apology is a great way to resolve conflicts, to enhance learning and to move on from difficult situations.

So if you’ve recently made a mistake, annoyed someone, spoken to harshly, etc. take the chance and apologize right now.

The Chief Happiness Officer’s monday tips are simple, easy, fun things you can do to make yourself and others happy at work and get the work-week off to a great start. Something everyone can do in five minutes, tops. When you try it, write a comment here to tell me how it went.

hjh6953

memory and made the importance of commuciation.Once, I changed a bed for a patient, she happened was not here.So I changed the bed by meself and had not made her belongs in order.For it was nearly twelve and it was time to go home,I was eager to go home and hurried to leave.In the afternoon, the patient found me and complainted that I made her objects in a mess.I didnot realized that I made a mistake until that time.I made a apology to the patient,I explained that I hadnot done well in my job and I would correct later.I thought about the matter, if I had explained clearly,she has not been so angry at me. This was my experience of making a apology

tyashk

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  An apology is very important for oneself.Because one can do introspections through apologies.Knowing what he did was wrong,and have the guts to admit it,then to correct it.We will live a very resonable and quiet life.So we can live in love.Am I right?Partly,I think.

  We almost make mistakes every day.But we don’t make an apology just in time.Why?Most of all,I insist it is shyness of doing it.And if you really recognize your fault about what you did,really want to make a perfect a life,you definitely shall choose the way to make an apology.

  First of all,I maintain it is of vital importance that to realise the mistake is the key to make an apology.If you regret and recognize it is wrong.The problem solves.Then one shall do this in a positive attitude,based on solving problems.

  All in all,making an apology is the most efficient way to solve the problems which exists on mind.We shall make an apology in time with a proper way.We will live a happier life.

janny80

How to deal with all kinds of relationships is an important part of life. To keep our friendship and love, sometimes we need to apologize to others who suffer from our behaviors or words. Since this can do great help to us and make others feel relaxed and happy, why not?

 

However, some people especially those with strong pride feel reluctant to make an apology even it's truly their fault. They would rather lose a dear friend than apologize since they consider it a shame and no face if they do so. That's too bad we often think and act in this way, then we could lose the most important person in our life.

 

 We can see that, if you don't want to live in regret in the rest of your life, apologize seriously to the people you love hurt by you. Nothing can be compared with the love among people; we can gain strength, motivation, confidence and comfort from it, and then move on with great bravery. So, please do cherish the friendship and love around you, apologize to your friends frankly when you are wrong.

leona87115

thank you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

winnieh230

To me, making an apology is not a trouble thing. When I found a mistake, I will surely say sorry by heart. That is my attitude to address mistakes, just showing the pure-heartiness towards my friends.

 

 Once I borrowed a book from my friend, Jenny. When I finished reading the book ,I put it in someplace that I nearly forget then . One day, she asked me whether I saw the book and borrow it. It maybe an awful thing that I forget I have borrow it and said no. She wasnervous for the book was from the library. If it’s lose, five times of the pay should be compensated. There days later, I was tidying my room ,and found the book. And that time ,I called Jerry the fact. She just said lucky to the thing. But I knew, I made the wrong thing and making her nervous for several days. I said an apology to her, and brought it back to the library myself.

 

 Making an apology for the mistake is not hard. Be sincerely to ours friends is of the most importance. She/He will forgive you for your true-heartiness. Be brave to admit the mistakes in our life.

[ 本帖最后由 winnieh230 于 2008-7-1 09:38 编辑 ]

julies

    Every one  be likely to make mistake or offend somebody.So,apology is become important and necessary.It will hold together your personal relationship.Different people has different way to apology to others.Somebody make it succeed,the others are failed.

     As for me.There are some way to adapt when i offend somebody.firstly,i will find a right time to express my sorry to the person who i am offend.Because in a wrong time to apology to somebody is not a advisable thing.He won't not only forgive you but also add his hate to you.

     Secondly,if he is not nearby me,i will go to her place to apology to her.Because the behaviour can add my sincerity.

     Last but not least.I will invite her to have a eat or drink at a place.

     Above all,i think good atitude is the most important factor.

panxiangyu2008

Everyone makes mistakes. But even though two people committed the same errors, they may lead to different results. Knowing how to use the art of apologizing is usefull to us, which has two meanings, the awareness of when to apologize and how. We apologize only when it is necessary. If a person is much too good at apologizing for any reason, on any occasions, and at any time, other are more likely to be annoyed by his kind of concept. They may think he is hipocritical or is planning something mean. We apologize when it is the time to end the misunderstanding or dispute or even hatred. So we don't do this when we have used up our friend's ball pen they lent to us, but do do it when we have broken their pens. The other question is how. There is no exact measures to how we apologize. Sometimes when we have done something wrong, we can say sorry or many other phrases or sentenses that can show our regret. But if you want your purpose to be achieved, which means your target will no longer be dissatisfied with you, the precondition is you are warm and sincere enough. Admit your wrongdoing bravely and try to make your relationship not be influenced by this. Sometimes your have stepped further than a person can bear, promising him you will never make the same mistakes is necessary. This is my idea of how to apologize. This kind of art can not be grasped unless you are carefull enough, and once you get it , it will do you much good.

Brucewang824719

                                                         How  to  make  a  apology
        We all make mistakes in our life.That's how we learn and grow as humans.The best way to learn how to do something right is to make mistakes while you try for yourself.Still,it's important to apologize when you are wrong,to admit you mistake so you can move on with your life.
        I'm make a big mistake in the past,furthermore I also didn't apologize to her.Now remember this matter really regretted very much.I remember that day.I and my good friends go to the cinem in the evening,after the film finished,we walk on the way home.Suddenly,we saw there is a woman seems to worry about very much.we went over to ask her what's happened,she told us about she forgot go home'way.she told us where her home is.We decided to  make a joke with her,so we told her wrong way of going home.
       In my opinion,I think that a man make mistakes is not to be terrible,he's afraid not know make a apology after make mistakes.
     admit:承认       make  a  apology:做出道歉      regret:后悔    go over:走过来

xmenglish

  Someone may think that making an apology is nothing important so that they have never done it so far. And because of this, their relatives and friends perhaps may be in a fit of depression. To a extent, this situation affect their life. In my opinion, apologizing for your mistake is very necessary. And it’s more important to apologize in a proper way. We can choose different ways to make an apology for our mistakes. To someone sentimental we can prepare some small gifts he or likes and a note together with some apologizing words and some sweet words. To someone outgoing we may try admit our mistakes directly. He or she is likely to smile for it. Different people have different ways, we can share it.

 

stonel

                                                 Apology

   “I found my best love, but I didn’t treasure her, I felt regretful after that, it the ultimate pain in the world! If God can give me a chance, I will tell her three words:” I love you”! If God wanna give me a time limit, I will say this love will last 10 thousand years.” These are classical lines from a film that features zhouxingchi, which is popular among Chinese people. But today my apology starts with these beautiful sentences.

      I have been living apart from my girlfriend for three months due to my work. As a stranger in a strange city, she has savored all the bitterness and hardship in these days, and really felt what “along, a lonely stranger in foreign land, I pine for kinsfolk doubly on a holiday” means, so she decided to quit his well-paid job to return to me. Considering her future, I persuaded her to attach primary importance to her work and abandon the idea, which resulted in her misunderstanding and tension between us.

     After much deliberation, I decided to apologize for my carelessness, I neglected her feeling, and failed in showing enough cares and concerns during the period, but to give the devil my due, I am not unselfish. If love between both sides can last for aye, why need they stay together night and day? As long as we love each other sincerely, I believe, temporary separation will lay a good foundation on for our permanent happiness.

     Long live the understanding!

     May understanding linger in our hearts all the year!

     My love, do you hear?

明-明

Don't be shy! Just try! It's polite to make a apology. No body can not make mistakes. So it is important to make a apology . Think of yourself . You can!