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2008年6月30日第109期英文写作擂台赛

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本期题目: First love

 

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: First love 

You should write at least 120 words :

 

每个人都会有自己的初恋,都有自己美好的回忆;初恋是情窦初开的自然产物,是神圣的不可亵渎的。你愿意分享一下你的记忆吗!两情相悦,花前月下,浪漫惹人妒,你是否正处于热恋中,你愿意让我们感受一下你的喜悦吗!如果你还没有遇到,你可否也讲述一下你的梦中情人。


 

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First love

 

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: First love 

You should write at least 120 words :

 

每个人都会有自己的初恋,都有自己美好的回忆;初恋是情窦初开的自然产物,是神圣的不可亵渎的。你愿意分享一下你的记忆吗!两情相悦,花前月下,浪漫惹人妒,你是否正处于热恋中,你愿意让我们感受一下你的喜悦吗!如果你还没有遇到,你可否也讲述一下你的梦中情人。

 

First Love

Everybody have first love yourself,have nice memory.when I was 18,I am a freshman in a Normal Univesity,first love came to me.In that summer holiday,

  • yangzhou 金钱 +5 第一个参与者!谢谢你的支持! 2008-6-30 13:26
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                                                    First  Love

Although it has been a long time,the scene is still in my head clearly.It happend ten years ago when I was 18.At that time,we were facing the college enterance examination.It began at a weekend.He shouted atme with my name on the road I went home.I was very supried because I didn't know a little befor.What we talked indeed then I forgot,but it was sure it was a good time.Now I recall the time,I feel there is a warm current flowing into my heart.We helped each other in studying and life.Though we were very poor that time,he gave me a lot of surpried things.

I am still very apprecited for what he gave me then.And the good time will alwayls be along with me.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +15 感谢你的分享!每个人都应该有一份属于自己的!也请继续参与我们的活动! 2008-6-30 13:28

                                                                                                                       Frist Love
   This theme bring many members to me. They are all the wonderful members. It is just when I’m a high school student. At that time we were pute. I remember that we can’t deliver ourselves to each other. We even don’t know what’s the love mean., but I think we were happiness at that time, because we had play sports and did homework with each other . He always followed me to everywhere. We through so many merry days that I can’t forget him through to now. But we don’t contact with each other after we had been part. Now I have a good boyfriend , and I think so is he. I hope we can find new happiness with our companion .
  Frist love is the indelibility , but the happiness we can control is to cherish the companion who will company with us all the life.

 

Frist Love
     This theme bring many members to me. They are all the wonderful members. It is just when I’m a high school student. At that time we were pute. I remember that we can’t deliver ourselves to each other. We even don’t know what’s the love mean., but I think we were happiness at that time, because we had play sports and did homework with each other . He always followed me to everywhere. We through so many merry days that I can’t forget him through to now. But we don’t contact with each other after we had been part.
     Now I have a good boyfriend , and I think so is he. I hope we can find new happiness with our companion .
    Frist love is the indelibility , but the happiness we can control is to cherish the companion who will company with us all the life.
  • yangzhou 金钱 +18 我很赞同!谢谢你的支持!两小无猜,纯洁无瑕! 2008-6-30 13:31

First  Love

    First love,hha,how to say,it has left for so many years.Let me count,yes,it has been four years.Both sweet and sorrow mixed in my first love.

    It was 2001,I met a handsome boy.I admit I always be attracted by handsome men.Almost at the first sight,we fell in love with each other.I lived a very happy life at that time,we went to library together,we had lunch and supper together,we absented classes together.We do almost everything together.It was the typical campus love.Although we were poverty,we saw love in each other's eyes.we felt we were the happiest man in the world.We did not care anything else,love is the most important thing in our heart.

    With the time past,There were more and more differences between us.It 's hard to say who was right,maybe in the love world,nothing is wrong.In a word,the happy time had gone,we quarrelled for some small things more and more often.At last,we could not bear any more,ended the four-year relationship.

    This is my first love.Cause time can cure the heart  hurt,although it has its sorrow side,there is only sweet left in my memory.And I think,life is full of hope,there must be an excellent  man waiting for me at the nearby.Best wishes to myself and I must be happy.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +30 感谢你的分享!人生本来就象一场梦,有甜就有苦! 重要的是我们应该记住我们的快乐!这是什么也抢不走,夺不去的.但并不是每个人都能够做得到! 2008-6-30 13:35

The theme reminds me some happiest days in the past. I will never forget him. We are still sincere friends, though we have parted for 2years. This is enough for me.

 

 

I encounter him when I was 18.He is a clever and handsome man. I was attracted by his mature attitude to deal with things in working and in life. He loved me for my bona fides. I was always a small girl walking behind him. We were not in the same city, and I went to see him several times a year. When we are together, I prepared the lunch for him. So sweet I felt, when I saw him eating. And after lunch ,he washed the dishes for me . I hoped the moment could replay day after day until we became old.

 

 

I am sorry for not saying the reason that we parted. That is crude for me. Anyway , we meets in the internet some times, talking about oneself recent situation and encouraging to work for the prefect future. For knowing he is well ,I will be happy. The is the best thing for the past love.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +22 过去的就过去,幸福可以留下,其他的就让他随风而去吧!感谢你的支持! 2008-6-30 13:38

This topic 'First Love' brings me to the beautiful memory nine years ago when I was still a sophomore in university. It was on April 16th that we met, and now it is the most important day to me for the man I encountered became my husband after we graduated.

 

How dramatically the day was in my heart! It was Friday night and after spending in writing one lecture on May 4th youth day for an hour, I still couldn’t write it out as expected, so I walked out of the classroom and wanted to have a relaxation. I decided to join the English Corner held every Friday when I passed by just to kill time. Then I encountered the guy who came from our neighbor university which is well-known by the smartness, seriousness of their students. But unfortunately, the guy's oral English was not so good that I soon loosed the interest to continue our conservation.

 

However, it happened to rain as I was leaving, then the guy caught up with me and asked where he could shelter from the rain. Sure, then we had a good talk under one eaves of a classroom building, of course, in Chinese. After that, we were sure we fell into love at the first sight. Then we began to date and accompanied with each other for nine years until now.

 

Nothing is perfect in the world, though most of the days are full of sweet; we also have quarrels and unhappiness. But these are all small cases to us, for we cherish each other more and we now have a lovely little baby girl. She is the best present I get from my 'First love'.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +25 有点段桥白娘子的传奇味道!不过你比她更幸福!谢谢你的参与! 2008-6-30 13:45

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                                     First love              

First love, a beautiful name, is pure and simple.

It goes beyond worldly matters.

It is the first unfolding flower in one’s life, fresh, aromatic and beautiful.

It is like the rising sun, full of glorious beams, nothing can be compared.

Perhaps you don’t like it, but to give the devil its due, as one person that is physically or mentally sound, who can forget the happy memories of first love?

 

Ten years ago, an artless boy and a beautiful girl,

Confided their “feeling” by writing some interesting message on small pieces paper; Expressed their “love” with the simple gesture of gift-giving;

They were simple but happy, and needn’t mind the result.

 

Now the scene is still unchanged, but the “lover” is strange.

Time is gone never to return, but first love is like fine wine, improves with age.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +25 写得很棒!感谢你的支持! 2008-6-30 16:20
The first love gave me impressive memory ,though it happened over ten years ago , because I got married to my first boyfriend in 1998 and we have been lived for ten years.Now I could recall clearly the sight when first met.It was a rainy day, we meet in our hospital and he gave me the impression that he is talkative.Later we associated and I knew more about him.He was a wise and honest person and he was very good at his job.At that time, his younger sister was studying in high school, and my boyfriend invariously  visited her , encouraging her and giving her some money.From this, I realized that he had a sense of responsibility,which is very peecious.We had a crush on each other and fall in love.
There was also some unpleasant experience between us. Once he didnot gave me any present even not calling me on valentine's day.Especially when I saw others all went outside to play with friends together, I got very so angry that I have not contect him.He knew the reason of leading to my displease.He explained that he was very busy the whole day,and he knew nothing about the festival,he has been loved me and regarded the important person in his heart.I forgave him and I knew he was not romatic and he always concern me in silently.Later, we firmly believed we would love and be loved for ever. In 1998, we got married.Now our son is already eight years old.When recalling these memories. there are still sweet feelings in our hearts.
  • yangzhou 金钱 +30 有情人终成眷属!感谢你的分享!也请继续支持我们! 2008-6-30 16:23
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  • yangzhou 金钱 +1 为什么不写一下自己呢?只要提笔,你就会发现不同的! 2008-6-30 16:24

First love

  It was two years ago.I meet my present lover.Actually,it's not to say we met,should to say it was somebody arranged our to met.It was a very hot summer.Mis zhang,which was my colleague called me to met one of her husband's friends.So i followed her came to belun xianlayuan restaurant.When we arrived there,both of her husband and the boy were arrived at the restaurant.Of course we have finished dinner.After that night,we were conversation and meet frequently and then we become a pair of lover.

    Nowadays,when i think the way i look for my lover is very funny and normal.But he is really a good boy,So i think i am so lucky to meet he.

  • yangzhou 金钱 +15 平凡不一定平谈! 感谢你的参与! 2008-6-30 16:26
                           First   love
       There are a great deal of loves in one's life,but only the first love will leave nice memory to youself,and it is sacred.
       Nowsdays,more and more loves appearing on the campus.It seem that the campus love already become kind of fashion.
       All of my good friends have already found along to their girl friends,therefore I also decided to find one own girlfriend.One day,I and my good friends go shopping in the market.Suddenly,I see the front of four and five girls,
one of them is very lovely,I am looking at her steadily,my friend found it,He asked that I have the  favorable impression to her,I nodded.I decided to invite them and our eat meal together, then I vindicated to her. Buring the period of eating meal,I put out a rose to give her suddenly and  I said I like you,I hope to
assouate with her,he nodded.That is my first love,and you?
sacred(神圣的)
     steadily:目不转睛   favorable impression:好感   vindicate:表白  assouate:交往
  • yangzhou 金钱 +15 每个人的状况可能不同,但期间的幸福应该是一样的! 2008-6-30 16:28

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First love Everyone has his fist love.For me it is a beautiful things.It was long time ago. when I was in a middle school,i met the man which i first love .His transfer student in my class.I remember the fist day teacher introduce him to us said that the new classmate enter my class was a grave boy. He stop one year study in school just because he encouter a car accident .and ask us to make friend with him and give him more care.I appreciate his strong and grave spirits.we soon became friends .He sited behind me, we were always talked and playing together.he waited for me at my school gate everymoring ,and sent me to my home afer school. we were fail in love soon.My heart was filled with happiness at that time.but at last we were part .Now ,we are still a good friend,I just wished he live happy and marry with a girl who can bring happniess to him.
  • yangzhou 金钱 +15 珍惜一切美好的东西!感谢你的分享!也请继续关注我们! 2008-6-30 16:29
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