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2008年6月23日第102期英文写作擂台赛

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2008年6月23日第102期英文写作擂台赛

 

 

 

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本期题目:今天的写作是看图写作(试卷上也会有重复的题目,大家再次写是不是会更好呢?)
Directions: 
  Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
    1) describe the drawing,
    2) interpret its meaning, 
    3) point out its implications in our life.
  You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
 
 
 
 
 
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From this cartoon, a man stands at the top of the mountain. Every thing is under his foot. It's easy for him to look the landscape all over the mountain.

 

The cartoon is simple, but we can find a truth. The higher you stand, the more landscape you watch.

 

For us, if you want to get a good job in future, you should take more time or money first, and prepare well before the chance coming. If you are still a student, you should learn more in the school as possible as you can. Or you will be sorry to miss the chance just for you didn't learn before. Although you also know that you can watch the nice landscape at the top of mountain, you can't climb the mountain, or fall at the middle of the mountain, you also can't find the nice landscape.

 

Just for a worker, at first, he is only a operator for a workpoint, It's difficult for him to know the fully procedure, maybe he also didn't know why he should do this point in the procedure. But if he do better, and he will have chance to become a line leader,  then he will know more.

 

But how can we arrive at the our top mountain? In fact, we can't get the goal in the first time. We should do our best to finish the basic working first, then upgrade ourself step by step. I think we will arrive at the top in the end. And you will find the beautiful landscape so!

The drawing above describes a man who stands on the top of the topmost mountain with his hands crossed behind his back. He looks down at the scenery under his foot. He is so confident that it seems like everything is under his control.

 

The drawing tells us that the higher you stand the more scenery you can get. If you want to enjoy the more beautiful scenery, you should stand higher than others. Like the man in the drawing, he can take a view of everything under his foot because he stands highest. It can be inferred that no matter in work or life, if you want to get more, you should master more at first. For example: In work, you pay more, you can get better performance than others; you may get promotion by your better performance, then you will enrich yourself by practicing yourself to meet the higher position requirement; then move on, it will form a good cycle for you. Once you get the highest position, you can have the full view of everything, you know better than anyone and will feel more confident, and then you can conduct everything at ease.

 

Obviously, we can see that if we want to achieve a goal in our daily life, we should do our best to stand at the best position for the goal by making the best preparation step by step. Once we master all the skills or knowledge for our goal, we will find everything is under our control. So even face the hardest task in your daily work, don't lose heart, list all the 'mountains' you need to climb to the best position, then  'climb up' them one by one with your hard-work, then you can get what you wanted one day eventually.

your essay is very beautiful
It's a cartoon picture, we can see the picture showed that a man stands at the top of the mountain. Everything is under his foot. It's easy for him to look the landscape all over the mountain. The ancient said a wisdom word: standed high, you can see more and far.The cartoon is very simple. Just composed of a few lines. But nowaday. If you can stand the hightest point to see the whole landscape when you faced some issues of your work or future. Maybe you can see some different something and think more about them.
it's great ! i like it !

    In the drawing, we can see a person standing on the top of a mountain, with his eyes staring into the  faraway distance. Everything such as the clouds ,the trees even the other mountains is beneath him.

    The meaning of this drawing is obvious. We all have the same experience that if we want to see something in the distance, we can climb up a tree or a building to get some help. As is known to all, standing  on a high place can broaden our views, so we can see more clearly.The higher one stands, the more he sees.

    We can use this principle in our life as well. When facing with difficulties,one should not escape but try to stand on a "high place" to see clearly what has happened and what should be done then. Here "high place" is considered to be a more objective position, where one can look clearly on the matter . Furthermore, with the rapid development of the society, anyone who still lives in a well just like the frog will finally be left behind. We should climb up the mountain of our life so that we can catch up with the pace of the modern society,or even walk ahead of it.

 

In this picture , you can see a man stand on the top of the highest mountain .And with this method, the man can see  furthest .

 

What can you think about with this picture ? Can you know its implication? Of course , in our lives , we must stand on the top of the highest mountain. If we do so , we will find that things is not just like its surface.For example, when we defeat , we must see its win coming.

 

If your want to be a successfull person, you must stand on the top .

Obviously, we can see that if we want to achieve a goal in our daily life, we should do our best to stand at the best position for the goal by making the best preparation step by step. Once we master all the skills or knowledge for our goal, we will find everything is under our control. So even face the hardest task in your daily work, don't lose heart, list all the 'mountains' you need to climb to the best position, then  'climb up' them one by one with your hard-work, then you can get what you wanted one day eventually.
 
From this picture,we can see the man stand in the top of the mountain,more beautiful landscape on his foot that can be watch more easy.The man so confident everything can be make the easy.
 
The draw like so sample but they can tell us the true fact.If you stand higher ,you can watch the more fast.for us ,if you want to gain more ,you can pay much more.For example,when the student graduated the university,they want to find the good job that the salary must high,the work so easy and the foreground of the development must good and so on,but now more company can need some people who is  basic of speciall  
must be good and need some experience.So as to some people can not find the job fit hisself.For some people who have some experience ,but as the time speed up ,they are not the fervor to do the work,they statify the status in quo.dont  study the new knowledge,so some people can overrun them .this example can many in our life.
 
In my opinion,we should be watch the more fast we dont statify the status in current.only we can stand the huge man shoulder we can watch more fast ,we need promote ourself incessancy.

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As we see, the picture describes a man who stands on the top of the mountain and looks down at the scenery under his foot. It seems like everything is under his control. The picture tell us that if you stand the higher ,and you can see more scenery.
今天看图写作文

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     In the above cartoon, a man is standing on the top of the mountain dominates over all surrounding others and enjoy everything from here. In other words, it means the reputable verse: “you can enjoy a grander sight by climbing to a greater height,” Which embodies the spirits of pursuiting the higher standard, and encourage people on different life’s journeys to take broad and long-term views and go forward at all times.

    In my opinion, it is very important for every one even every nation to uphold the spirits. For example, while making great efforts to increase our current quality of life, we must simultaneously consider environmental protection, because the earth is our common home, not only our home, but also the home of our children and grandchildren, as well as all other plants and animals. A further example, china, as a great nation, the party central committee and the state council took a broad and long-term view, began to deploy the post-disaster reconstruction work while leading the fight against earthquake in may, and received complimentary reviews.

    In brief, the higher you climb, the more beautiful scenery you will enjoy; the harder you work, the more progress you will make. Be a farsighted person, a man without a longhead would regret what he has done.

From this drawing,we can see that a man stands on the top of the moutain,among the lots of clouds.And there are also Chinese characters,says:stand higher,look further.fficeffice" />

  I insist that the meaning of the drawing is that success requires qualifications.If one wants to get a sight of the far place,he must climb high of the mountain.

  As far as I am concerned,every coin has two sides.You can see the man stands on the mountain,and he could see farther,but he is single,and it is dangerous for him to stand on the peak of the mountain.He is faced with both opportunities and dangers.Opportunities are the right of control the situation,the danger is he could drop off the mountain every moment.The same we can find it in our day-to-day life,everything almost comes to us with its package:goods and badness.We should make use of the positive things in those,throw the badness away,or keep close attention about the danger.How to accomplish this is very techonical,we get ourselves improved day by day.

  In a nutshell,we should not neglect the danger in the opportunities,and we should try our best to create the opportunities,they are the qualifications of success.
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