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本期题目：
Women in the Modern World

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SunnyZou

yanyan，辛苦啦，我仅代表大耳朵中央感谢你！！！

dreamerlv

I would like to have a look at your essay. Thank you.

start1

i think woemn play an important role in our society .

lyb199299

Women in the Modern World

 

  In my opinion, women in the modern world  are playing double roles. On the one hand, women have to take good care of their families at home, for instance,cleaning the house, looking after the child, cooking. On the other hand, women have to go higher in the competitive working place. Nowadays, as the society develops, receiving further education continuously  is a necessary step for everyone, and women are not an exception. 

yayafirst

                                                                                  women in the mordern world

    With the update of  our attitude,more and more women play an important part in the mordern society.in the old times,the woman can only just be as the wife and the mother,their day life are just do the housework substitute working in the outer.Although they have own jobs ,just only  the nurses ,the teachers,and so on .The work which are more important are always the man's positions. 

In all worlds ,the women can hold the half sky.

gabriel18

      When I see the topic ,I has complex emotion with it,why? It's can not easily to saying with simple little words.As truly to say,I had never loved a woman before her.first also end.we had lived togther two years .It's very sweetness and happiness before the accident.It's my first experience to know the woman and very despair.
   I will never love other woman since the accident, even though I know that there are so many good woman in the world,but I had no strengh to try again.
   woman,always be describe as pretty angel or kindly mother.they bring sunshine and future to our world,always,follow many tragedy such as treachery,pruriency,If wrong begin on the wrong woman will lead a man dead or even destory a country.
     I'm a poor man in the sentiment world,my only lover has new boyfriend when we are toghter two years.Two years ,my All tendance and concern circumfused her ,I always help her to eated ,to swabed down,and bought her with many fan games,DVD films,and wahtever she want .the thing which give her always best and the thing that leave me always bad,Wash clothes and cooking etc,never let her doing things, Nevertheless,I will feel very uncomfortable if she said that she want something,It's show that I can't consider her emotion quickly and that is my mistake.,,,Am I wrong?maybe,,,
    So,women ,I know the woman ,only bring injury to me . [ 本帖最后由 gabriel18 于 2008-5-15 16:54 编辑 ]

skytangtang

Women in the Modern World

    Nowadays ,women are playing an increasingly role in modern world.More and more outstanding women appeared in kinds of departments.Women can do almost things as equally well as men.They also independent on mental and finincal.So women are no longer look domn upon by society.

yangzhou

Women in the Modern World

 

With the development of the society, women play the more important role nowadays.

 

In the past, almost all works need the physical force, and men is better than women, so the men stand the magistral position. But with the science develop, and we needn't spend more physical force in our working, and it's not necessary to work outside all times. so the type of working changed, and women also have many chance to work, and play more important role from now on.

 

More and more women come out of the house, and take part in the working, and stand the important position. The people is accustomed to work with woman.

 

Women have stronger self-confidence than before, in fact, they do better and not less than the men. And in some field, they do better than the men do.

yxshadow

Many people say women get unfail treatment in work,but the fact thatmany work are not fair women .Man and women are diffrent in many ways,you kwon women are always work as waiter ,secretary and other ways.I think most women have got enough right in nowdays and many law keep theirs right won't be infringe.

kangshuo

In recent time, women play an important role in the world  beaause women can act as  best as men in every field.No one be aware of  suspicious that women have ability to anything like men, for reality have proved the view.

 

In ancient years,it is the world that men control all of things and women nearly have little socity status and power to do what they want to do, what that can do is staying at home and taking care of their children and husband, they must allow their parents ,husbands.Now conditions have compelety changes,as we often say, women hold the half sky.They are no longer only the housewives at home,for they have gone out to work to do all kinds of jobs.In some fields, women even have achieved amazing score and everyone admire them, such as athlete Deng yaping Wangnan,actor Gongli Zhangziyi and so on.

 

It is quite clearly that women contribute to the improvement of society  and human beings,so we must respect  and learn form them.

frankwsg

Women in the modern world

 

              There is no denying the fact that women in modern world  always attract more extensive concerns and arguments.As a critical memble  of families and communities,people have not accordent opinions about womens function and status.Usually,there are different sex discrimination against  women which is allowed in law.Many women comlain that they have experienced some unfair treaments on jobs or lives.

              In faimily some men think it is enough for women to tend the older and children better and handle kinds of chores as cooking,washing clothes.Women should not worry about some things out of family,even men's works in society.What is worse, some women become victims of family violences which hurt severely women's bodys and hearts.In jobs there are a popular ideas that women are less capable than men in many fields. Hiring women usually means more troubles men because women have more individual things, such as  caring for family, bearing baby.Women have little  opportunities to win a promotion or broad authority for their fine performance.In community, we hardly hear louder voices from women on public affairs.Women still are forced to involve in protecting their rights under large social pressures.

              Actually everyone could not take a blind eye and a deadf ear to women's roles and contributions in society.Their diligence, carefulness and persistance help them more competitive.We have observed that they can implement tasks as well as men if entitled to get full scopes. In modern society what women only lack  is not abilities but  fair opportunities.

 

cissy080

                                             Women in the modern world

After the success of "women's right" movement, women are respected by the society. Now in the modern world, women play an important role not only in a family, but also in the management or in the sociality activities.

More and more women are the head leaders of some companies.  They should take the meeting, make the plan for company's development, and do other important things. Many women get geart success in the research admistration, in the trade industry, and so on.

 

baichidenvren

women is the morden world is important

MAGGIECAI85

work hard~~come on~