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2008年5月11日第59期英文写作擂台赛，每天一期，敬请关注，按时参与。重在参与！

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本期题目：请简要阐述为什么学生们渴望上大学。

 

Don't be shy!Just try!

 

 

 

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bobowa1398

Don't be shy!Just try! maybe everyone have his own aim in his life ,but not everybody can get it ,because somebody often very shy . in my opinion ,if you want to finish one thing ,you must try to do it ,even if you are defeated one time ,you can again and again ,maybe the last result is still fail,nevertheless,you have enjoy the whole course。the people around you will not laugh at you ,so you needn't be shy.

start1

构思了下，些出来还是有难度哈

barrytan

This question are interesting and meaningful nowadays.If you are out of job or you are a HR manager, you need find a job or look for suitable peple of work. If you were to go into the human resource market, you would get the result.There are many reasons for this tide. Looking from the jobless, hige diploma maybe mean hige wage. There are hundreds of work chances in the human resource market. Most of the work chances demand that job seeker is not only full of rich experiences,but also high diploma,at least is bachelor which means job seeker have gone to the university. Looking from the HR manager, most of them agree that different work need different knoledge degree. Undoubtedly, high diploma is always valuable for the work. Maybe the boss of company likes to use people of high diploma to do work ,even simple work .In the end, the qualify of work is beyond their ture need . Most work's qualify is undergraduate at least. It tell jobseeker if you want to get a job , you should go to university firstly. As a normal people, two sides of work maybe indicate me that I should require my son to go to university at least, otherwise, he will be out of work in the future. In my opinion, It's a good thing that there are more and more people who have high diploma.Knoledge will push the develpoment of society.,and society will need more and more college students. Society ,in turn, will also need many peple to do simple work.

benben19810906

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gyjkyy

Knowledge is power. When you graduate from university,that means you can have a good job, high salary and splendid future. You can grasp the excellent chance in today's harsh competition. Diploma is not almighty, but without it, a man can't step forward easily.

minminth

         it is indisputable that knowledge is very useful .there is going to say knowledge is power .so to learn more is important ..

 

         . to begin with..it is a fiecely in the work.so many people to gain so few job .so .go to collage is want to get more apportunities to find a good job and to have a more bring furture..

 

          another important factor is to go to collage is the main way to improve their abilities .such as..communication skill and orgnization skill and so on ..this four years can make the yonth improve in a new step..

 

        least but not last.to go to the collage ..their will face another new life,,,no mother`s` prating ..no father`s education.no pressure on the homework ...all they have is sunshine,flowers ,grasses romantic love .and comfortable life..so ....may some one just want to get rid of the annoy life in the pass ,just want to live a wonderful life

 

      . in a word ..go to the collage is a most beatuful thing in one`s life .it will deep in your memory forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ 本帖最后由 minminth 于 2008-5-11 10:24 编辑 ]

jourty

The most simple reason is to learn more knowledge, If no high knowledge ,we can't exist while the science and technology is more advanced. A other reason is that want to construct our country better.

frankwsg

College: a fresh start, a new journey

 

As a kid, we had a dream of going to college one day and our parents also hoped us to enter the door of college. Why are we so eager to be admitted  by some colleges?  I have some ideas for you today.

          For college candidates ,usually college means a high school where we would accept better education and learn more advanced knowledges.  We can communicate with many specialists,professors and study all kinds of science and technoloy.Everyday we have many chances to discuss some issues with teachers and classmate.In the same time, we could develop our interests and hobbies in different fields. If diligent, there are a large harvest in our four years.We would grow up and become one of the  knowledgeable and healthy  social backones.These are what college can bring us.

          But when looking back on our college lives, we should have deeper understanding about college. Just as Steve Jobs said, CEO of Apple Computer, life is the journey.College is a important station in our journey.After said goodbye to our childhoods, we are going on a fresh start on college campus.Many dynamic and enthusiastic youngers live together,studying knowledges, communiting thoughts,helping each other.We have a good time that will make us to increase  our wisdoms , broad our visions and in command of  some techniques.At last We find a correct orientation directing us to move ahead and win our own position in lives.Whether we ever were joyful or worried about those years, it is  momerial experience and  precious property.

       These are attractation of college.I sincerely wish every young friend study hardly and grasp opportunities to enter college becacue college is a fresh start and a new journey for you.

yclin

今天来的早 先占个位子

gabriel18

occupy position 请简要阐述为什么学生们渴望上大学

shijie8332899

why people are yearn for going to college for study.there are many reason for it. frist,in our opinion,if someone can study in university mean that you will have a better life. second.university is a place where we can study freedom and easily,in there we could meet lots of diffierent people.as to high school student ,they are curious to see what is lke in univerisity. third,in the university we can do what we are want to do .parent does't around us any more,we are far away from our parent. but remember the most important is that never forget to study,if not you will regret what you will have done.

马聪慧

Knowledge is power. When you graduate from university,that means you can have a good job, high salary and splendid future. You can grasp the excellent chance in today's harsh competition. Diploma is not almighty, but without it, a man can't step forward easily.

jayamy001

     Why students want to go to the collect ? The best important problem is the pressure from society. For example their parents,teachers and another people. Every parents are all want to see their children have a nice future. So it is important for children to go to the collect. Whlile there are many students want to study more knowledge , so they want to go to the collect.

     If you are a collect graduate,you will find a good job. Compared with the other people who only is a senior high school student,they are have an advantage and can gain more money.

     If you are a collect graduate,it is a sign of having knowledge. In the country, if you haven't a good command of knowledge ,you will be eliminated from the society nowadays.

     All in all, as a student, becoming a collect graduate is the most important matter. It can help you have a beautiful future.

里里cslili

     Nowadays,there is a tendency that more and more students like to go to college rather than hunt a job when they graduated from the high school.What`re the reasons for such phenomenon.There are saveral differents opinions as follows:

     First of all,many people point out they go to college intent to improve themselves and become a  knowledgeable person.The knowledge we have learnd in the high school is not enough for us to get into social to find a good position,so we should to further and complete our knowledge stucture to meet the demands of our future jobs.

     Secondly,some people think that the further education may give them some more advantages to hunt a good job when they get into social and more changes for their career.As the fierce competition goes on,find a good job is become harder and harder.So take more talent with you is improtant.

     Finally,the life of college is a wonderful experience and indispensable chapter of one`s whole life.It noted the happiness and sadness we had experienced.The time is precious for us!