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2008年5月5日第53期英文写作擂台赛，每天一期，敬请关注，按时参与。重在参与！

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本期题目：每个人都会有生病的时候，当别人生病了你会如何去照顾呢；你自己生病了你是如何面对呢？大家可以畅所欲言

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gabriel18

One day My fairy fell Ill
      This topic has touch my mind deeply, everyone will feel difficulty when he is ill,
and need help by other people very much.at this time most people will help whoever need help and ignore whether acquaint with.love and help each other is human fine morals quality.whoever,of course include my deeply love being.
   All of the followings are my balderdashes, but is my heartfelt words,please don't laugh at me,hehe.
    My promise is that never let her doing things such as washing clothes,cooking food,cleaning room or doing work etc,I always fell happiness when I doing these things,Obviously that I am a man,most people believe that make money is man's most important thing and don not to do such above things,But I can't agreet that view.my fairy(wife) have a bad cooking technique and never doing housework.It's obviously to see that I very love her,
I feel very content every once I saw her sweet smile.just this is enough.
    If she fell Ill ,I won't know what shall I doing ,Maybe,
All tendance and concern will circumfuse her ,I will help her to eating ,to swab down,and bring her with many fan games,DVD films,and wahtever she want . Nevertheless,I will feel very uncomfortable if she said that she want something,It's show that I can't consider her emotion quickly and that is my mistake.Certainly,I will always concort with her and send her a bunch of fresh flowers everyday in her ill time....that is not all,the more I will doing for her because the simple reason,just love her. [ 本帖最后由 gabriel18 于 2008-5-5 10:17 编辑 ]

juliaenglish2007

你太有才了，还用这一招，我还以为失传了呢？ 哈哈。。。。。。。。哈哈。

sky2001015

    Yesterday afternoon I went to the hospital to see my seven months old nephew who was just out from the ICU where he had been in for ten days. He was checked-up that he had heart illness inborn. The doctor said that it was not serious but must be operated.

    It was on April 25th, my nephew had the fateful operation. Luckily, it was successful. And then, it was a ten days waiting to my elder sister and his husband. Maybe it was the longest and the most affictive waiting in their lives.

    It was also yesterday afernoon, another child, the same as my small nephew, who was late to operate, closed his eyes, with doctors and his parents standing beside him.

    Life was frail sometimes, and it was great meaningful to others around you. So we should take good care not only for oueselves but also for others.

    Everything had gone and the new life was about to start.

liuxiaoli198611

　It is impossible to find people who have never fallen ill. Illness is certainly a painful experience to everyone. I myself seldom fall ill; however, a few days ago I was seriously ill. That day, when I woke up in the morning, I did not feel well. I had a headache and was weak all over and had to excuse myself from school. Worried, mother took me to see a doctor. First, the nurse of the hospital took my temperature and then the doctor told me I should take a longer rest and take medicine regularly. If I followed the rules strictly, said the doctor, everything would be alright. That day I did nothing but lie bed and felt sorry and lonely. In the evening many classmates of mine came to see me after school. They sent me fresh flowers along with their love and I was deeply touched by their love and I was deeply touched by their love and I was deeply touched by their warm friendship. I have recovered now and have also learned from this experience how important it is for people to keep themselves healthy.

liuxiaoli198611

　It is impossible to find people who have never fallen ill. Illness is certainly a painful experience to everyone. I myself seldom fall ill; however, a few days ago I was seriously ill. That day, when I woke up in the morning, I did not feel well. I had a headache and was weak all over and had to excuse myself from school. Worried, mother took me to see a doctor. First, the nurse of the hospital took my temperature and then the doctor told me I should take a longer rest and take medicine regularly. If I followed the rules strictly, said the doctor, everything would be alright. That day I did nothing but lie bed and felt sorry and lonely. In the evening many classmates of mine came to see me after school. They sent me fresh flowers along with their love and I was deeply touched by their love and I was deeply touched by their warm friendship. I have recovered now and have also learned from this experience how important it is for people to keep themselves healthy.

563337029

today, our life level is advancement . it is a good thing.but, alone with it multifarious illness come forth. forexample, lately there is a virus indulage in the south of china. though it is fearful i think we are chinese men and we are unscared. the spirit is most important. if someone has lost it, it may be die.it is die for himself but the virus. when i was ill , i did not have the medicine. one side i would do more exercises than before.and the other i would tell myself that i was not ill.

linze1115

  Illness is a painful experience to everyone in the world, nobody is excepted! we almost will fall sick at a period of time，especially for the young and the old!

Sometimes,I always think that If I were ill now,I don't  have to work!It's so tired! How sweet if I can have a good sleep! Isn't it? I guess some of you may also have this kind of mind once in a while!Judging from this aspect, falling sick is not so bad thing! when you are ill, you only need lying on the bed, watching the loved busying for you,cooking,washing and other trifles you have no free time to do, even just opening your mouth!

At this time, you might be the most happiness man in the world!your heart is sp happy, enjoying everything!

Of course, all  I has described is limited to the indisposition!

when you or the people aroud you have severe diseases, for the sick, you must have strong faith on your health; for the relatives, you must keep optmistic, encourage him to smile to everyday, spend more time on looking after him, compensating for what you have no enough time to do,  never having your pity left!

  when facing the cruel social reality and miserable fate, man should be brave and struggle with all the pains and sufferings, loving life and treasuring life.

 

[ 本帖最后由 linze1115 于 2008-5-5 11:30 编辑 ]

yangzhou

How can we keep in health?

 

Although almost no one like to get illness, the illness always find us, especial in nowadays.

 

With the economy develop, more and more pollution happened, the environment becomes worse, and also impact our health, it's easy to get illness than before.

 

One more things reduce our health, and make us sub-health. In order to keep on the step of the social, we need to hard work, and always work in long time, maybe ten or more every day. and almost no time for relax, no time leave for our family, the working press also impact our health.

 

So more and more people get illness, and some of them killed by the illness.  How can we keep in health?

At first, pay attention to the environment, all of us should prefect it free from pulluttion. And we should live in the bule sky as before.

The second, we should live in a reguler working condition, the relax is needed. And we also need to share with our family or friend. And all of them will help us to release the press and keep us happy.

The third, we should take exercise, and make us strong enough. A good habit will give us health too.

 

 

 

 

carlli7323

     I have a clear stand on what to  love and what to hate!

     If someone I hate is ill, of course, I would not fell sorrow for him. At leat I would never call down a curse upon him. When the people I love fall sick, I really fell sad. I would try my best to take care of them. If i could ,I surely would! IGenerally, I will bring some flowers and fruits to the hospital.

    If I were ill, I used to stay alone. I don't want any people to know the matter. As a matter of fact, I am eager to be treated with mercy by my friends. But I don not want their worries.

hudie0418

Have a good mind and a healthy body are much important for everydody . Whatever you do ,wherever you are,you must keep this in your heart. Especially,for who want to be successful.

韩刘博冰

Health is so important.

hy191919

being ill

     as is known to all, everybody would be ill and known the terrible feeling of ill. when asked how to attend an patient, different people have different views……

barrytan

People should take care of each other. In other words, everyone must be ill sometimes,then we'll feel lonely, suffering and other bad feelings. so we need care and encourage of others. friend's power act each other.so we need our friends and the other way round.

nnrain

health is important for us ,so we should keep our body from illness . such us keep our hands clean ,do some sports ,keep a good diet ,drink plenty of water,and drink some milk ,all these is good for our body and make us a health life.