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本期题目：Harmfulness of Fake Commodities

 

 

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itao

There is no denying that fake commodities is becoming morn of a problem in China ,Amost any commoditirs can be copied. It is well know that fake commoditirs means a great loss to legitimate developers ,producers and authors in many ways ,To begin with ,they ofen cost far less than the original ones ,so they enjoy unbeatable advantage in prices in spite of their relatively poor quality.The original ones ,on the contrary ,sell poorly.Take a longterm veiw ,fake Commodities may also have negative impacts on customers since those legitimate commodities may be greatly hurt as a result of money loss. It is high time that everyone fight the battle against fake Commodities.

yangzhou

Harmfulness of Fake Commodities

 

With the develop of the economy, more and more commodities can be found from our living, all of them upgrade our living level. But more and more fale commodities also found from our living. We can't get any benefit from them but potential harm!

 

In order to get more money, or get money in a short time, some bad businessmen create or make the fake commodities. but all of them are not good for us the end user. We also need to pay for them and don't get the real value from them at all, some of fake commodities also give us harm. especail the fake medicine, we don't know how many people harmed from them, even killed by them. We ofter hear the bad news from TV or newspaper that some one be killed by the fake drink.

 

Some one said that we don't make the foodstuff and the medicine, and we only make the dressing which used the famous brand, maybe the cloth is same as them which produced by the famous company. And the price also lower than them. Why can't we do this so? I also don't agree with it. It's also the fake, and the harmfulness is not less than the fake medicine or fake drink. And it will harm our spirit, and aslo harm the market. The company also harmed by the fake.  In the past, we are a honest nation, but nowadays, we should pay more for our dishonest.

 

The fake give us more trouble and harmfulness!

asaro

i want to see.

小齐

With the development of our society , more and more fake commodities appear in our daily life .Fake commodities producers or fake commodities merchants are not doing such things in order to get more money ,they are disgusting .There are so many shortcomings at fake commodities . The following lists are some harmfulness of fake commodities : Fake commodities ,such as medicines and food , not only can not effective but also ,in some cases ,can be poisonous. Since medicine and food are as necessary part of our life ,that means we take poisons every moment.......

gabriel18

Harmfulness of Fake Commodities

   In recent years a lot of fake commodities have appears in our society.you will always buy some fake food or something in small shop,especially some big supermaket have also hard aviod. The fake commodities had already flowed into fair such as shampoo ,food,medicine,fertilizer

etc.This enormous fake commodities make great harm to our society.
    First,why so many fake commodities have appear in our society?I think the most factor is that some people want Gain without labour,because the fake commodities need less investment and oreignal material,and will make more profits and repay.the other reason is the fake commodities must more cheap than genuine goods,so many people want spend less to buy this substitute,follow this to make a certain market and maintain Its presence.
   Second,the fake commodities can make great harm to both consumers and genuine

manufacture.fake food or medicine will make the person fall sick or aggravate condition and

even have vital danger.In this spot that we would not be thirft and then we would spend more money to save it.And more,because the fake commodities Be full of a society,we became very afraid to buy the commodities due to our difficult distinguish whether true or false.
    From what have been discussed above,it's therefore,necessary that some effective measures are take to protect profits of consumer and genuine goods.on the one hand,we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcment of the laws to protect it.on the other hand,it is demanding for us to enhance our consciousness of the actions of rejecting the fake commodities.Although the fight against is longstanding and tremendous one,
our effort will eventually pay off,Only by doing so can genuine commodities authentically

bring happiness and welfare to our mankind.

[ 本帖最后由 gabriel18 于 2008-5-4 11:49 编辑 ]

jessie刘

a little hard for me !

linze1115

With the develop of the economy, more and more commodities can be found from our living, all of them upgrade our living level. But more and more fale commodities also found from our living. We can't get any benefit from them but potential harm! In order to get more money, or get money in a short time, some bad businessmen create or make the fake commodities. but all of them are not good for us the end user. We also need to pay for them and don't get the real value from them at all, some of fake commodities also give us harm. especail the fake medicine, we don't know how many people harmed from them, even killed by them. We ofter hear the bad news from TV or newspaper that some one be killed by the fake drink. Some one said that we don't make the foodstuff and the medicine, and we only make the dressing which used the famous brand, maybe the cloth is same as them which produced by the famous company. And the price also lower than them. Why can't we do this so? I also don't agree with it. It's also the fake, and the harmfulness is not less than the fake medicine or fake drink. And it will harm our spirit, and aslo harm the market. The company also harmed by the fake. In the past, we are a honest nation, but nowadays, we should pay more for our dishonest. The fake give us more trouble and harmfulness!

里里cslili

     With with the economic development ,more and more fake commoditied have been produced,we can see various of fake commodities in the shelves thorough the markets and superstores.Many people are not careful enough when  picking commodies,so sometimes they may be deceived by violators and buy the fake one.

 

     As we all konw,the fake commodities do harmful to us as well as the whole society.They waste time and

resource to produce,and make extremely bad influence to consumers.It is not all. form the surface,the owner who sell the fake commodities may profit by such behavior,but they will  be suffered  finally.

 

    As a consumer, we shall study how to product ourselves,don`t pursue a little benifit then lose more happiness and joy.Meanwhile,government must set a series legislation to restrict commerce.

563337029

now in the market more and more fake commodities are uttering. it deeply hurt us. for example, if the grocery is fake. we will be ill. evev, it can kill us. of course, the other fake commodities also are baneful. it will be mixed up our life . here, i will not amply talk it.

favourable

Faced with a flood of commercial advertisements,some people claim that ads exaggerate the function of the products,especially includind the fake commodities,which tempts people to buy things they do not really need.

lbaotao

With the development of our productivity, more and more productions as commodities can be found in our daily lifes. These certainly brings us convenience,meanwhile some fake commodities have beyond question evident or potential harmfulness to our spirit or bodies.

 

In order to earn enough wealth as soon as possible and spends lower cost, a few people should have product fake productions . Then they will sale the fake productions as common commodities through some agents, and so the fake productions inpour to our daily life. Some fake commodities are very harmful to us, especially fake drink, fake medicine,fake health produtions, and so on and so forth.We can hear the horrible news that someone disabled by fake drink ,fake food and so on on TV, what is worse we have to spent more money on the fake health produtions than the true health productions.

 

Except fake drink, fake medecine and so on which surely do harmful to our bodies, some fake commodities won't do harmful to our bodies,but they can bings more harmful to our spirits than those. For example, fake clothes--they will be saled a lower price and imitate some well-known brands. meanwhile they will do extremely harmful to the market.

 

 How shall we do? I reckon it will needs our corporate efforts do prevent the fake commodities circulating.

liuxiaoli198611

    In recent years, a lot of fake commodities have appeared in the market. These fake commodities have done great harm to the consumers and the society.
　　Since the policy of reform was implemented, China’s economy has improved. A lot of people getting richer, and their living conditions are getting better. But still some of them are not satisfied. They dream of getting rich overnight and living a heavenly life, which, of course, is impossible to achieve by fair means. So they risk breaking the law to produce the market take commodities.
　　Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do immeasurable harm to the society. The direct victims are the consumers. As the quality of the fake commodities is always very poor, the consumers may suffer great losses. Certain fake commodities, such as food and medicine, will cause irreparable harm to the health and well-being of the consumers. Fake commodities also cut into the profits of the brand-name-owners. Since the fake ones are cheaper, people tend to be reluctant to buy the genuine ones.

liuxiaoli198611

As national economy develops for the better, fake commodities prevail in many places of our country. Some profiteers, regardless of people’s interests, can’t wait to make a fortune, so that they just take risks making and selling fake goods. On the other hand, the punishment is not severe enough to stop the violators.

Today’s market, therefore, is swarming with fake commodities such as food-stuff, clothing and medicine.
Fake commodities are extremely harmful to consumers as well as to the whole society. Take, for example, the 1998 fatal alcohol poisoning case in Shanxi Province of Northern China. By adding methanol to water, a peasant produced “alcohol”, dreaming of becoming rich overnight. The incident, with 27 people killed and around 700 poisoned, caused great sufferings to the victims and shocked the whole country as well.

 A carry-over of fear left thousands of others in confusion and panic: they no longer had a sense of safety. How terrible a case it was! It’s really high time we took measures to crack down on the production and sale of fake commodities.

xlong2007908

Today’s market, therefore, is swarming with fake commodities such as food-stuff, clothing and medicine. Fake commodities are extremely harmful to consumers as well as to the whole society. Take, for example, the 1998 fatal alcohol poisoning case in Shanxi Province of Northern China. By adding methanol to water, a peasant produced “alcohol”, dreaming of becoming rich overnight. The incident, with 27 people killed and around 700 poisoned, caused great sufferings to the victims and shocked the whole country as well.