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 本期写作：Private　car

Outline:
1)Advantages of owning a private car.
2)Disadvantages of owning a private car.
3)Should it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not?

 

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linjianping1234

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Jet lee

  nowadays,the quality of our lifes is becoming more and more highly,the majority of people can afford to buy a private car ,and  someone is not only buy one more, because it is convenient for us to go some place where you like it , and i reckon that the advantage of the car is convenient for us and can save the times,although it is the transportation,the vehicle is various,and the disadvantage of the private car is too noise to sleep in the city , it pollute our earth ,and when you drive so fast it may be lead out the traffic ,so i account when we buy the car we must attention it ,

canthy_714309

nowadays, there are more and more private cars in china. it will be very convenient if you own a private car. you can go everywhere you want to go. especially in the holiday, you can take your parents and your children to the suburb to breathe fresh air.

canthy_714309

i read the news from china daily that there was a person named Mr.Li, after he bought a private car, his son then married a girl and produced his grandson. however, before he owned a car, it was very difficult for his son to marry a girl. and more private cars will mean more natural resources and more emission to the enviroment. it will be harmfull to our human being. in my opinion, i will not buy a private car if it is mot very necessary. maybe i will take a taxi instead of buying a car. therefore, i think our country should not enlarge the car market. if there are more and more cars are produced, it will reduce the price of the car. then more and more people will buy cars.

zmt8899110000

让我想到了新东方..........

 

 

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枫之恋

   nowdays as pepole/s stands of living improved,the number of private car is incresing dramatically ,it seemsthat more and more people want to own cars of their own .

    there is some advantdges of owing a priavate car ,for instance ,it is more convinent to go anywhere they want instead of spending much time on waiting a tasi or bus. but also , it seems easier for a person to get married od something else---in all, we can benefit a lot !

   on the other hand ,just a coin has two sides ,there isdlao some disadavantages ,ti is no denying taht the incresing car bring us serious polltion ,and traffic jams ,which ,on the countral , it is a worthing sonsiderating problems --

     in my view , we should control the number ,we can buy a car when it is critical nessiasry , in fact ,walkig ,riding bicycle is good for our health --

sunnypan2006

    With the development of technology ,the earth is becoming an earth village as we described.People are expected to work and live at a comparatively high speed. The people with  private cars can squeeze more time and strength than the people without  private cars , so private cars enable people to work and live more efficiently .It is already a trend of fashion and a symbol of competence.Moreover, it is a more practical vehicle in big cities especially for the families with babies and old parents. In some Chinese cities like Beijing, shanghai ,Shenzhen and so on , the importance of private cars even overweighes that of shelters.

 

    With the increasing consumption of private cars , people are aware the bad consequences it is bringing us. Firstly, the price of the fuel is soaring, the owners have to spend more money to make it running. Secondly, The  increasing number of private cars causes the traffic jam and we have to broaden our roads, build more subways and flyovers. And the parking lots are also a big problem to solve. Then a more serious problem involving the use of cars is endangering people' health------- the waste air emitted by cars.

    Chinese auto market is considered a promising one by the top international auto manufacturers such as General, Toyota, Ford, Hyundai and so on.  The increasing demand and the disadvantages of private cars compel the manufacturers to improve their technologies. Nowadays, the less-emitted , environmental-friendly  and family- oriented cars are highly popular with people. And new clean energies are  also applies to the car such as solar energy and ethanol. But both the manufacturers and the users should combine to reduce the bad aspect to a lowest cost. The enlarged auto market will benifit people in return that private car will become less expensive and owining a private car is not a dream but a goal. Chinese auto industry will be fully developed as well.

[ 本帖最后由 sunnypan2006 于 2008-4-27 16:05 编辑 ]

zhaoxinpk

                                                                                 Private　car
        I like private car, like B M W, Aston Martin, Ferrari and Lamborghini. In china we can see private　car everywhere. Following the developing of chinese economic. More and more people have private car. This is a symbol of china more and more prosperous. Sometimes some things has two faced. Now the ever-rising demand of private car bring many problems to us.
        Advantages of owning a private car. We have many reasons to prove the ever-rising demand of private car is a gooding to us. First in china there are a lot of foreign companys. Foreign capital introduction is good for the economic of china. The second the foreign companys cultivate talents for china it be propitious to developing nation industry. Third it can resolve the problem of get a job.
        Disadvantages of owning a private car.The environmental problem is the most important problem. Motor vehicle exhaust not only pollution of the environment but also the steam is harmful to organism. Leave a nice living space to our posterity must be solve this problem. Ofcourse the problem of traffic in city and the car need large numbers of petroleum resources.
        whether it be necessary to enlarge the private car market depend on market demand. In my opinion we should place solve the environmental problem as the priority. Only One Earth, Care and Share.

[ 本帖最后由 zhaoxinpk 于 2008-4-27 10:26 编辑 ]

里里cslili

     Nowadays,more and more people would like to own a private car.With the sharply development in economy,people earn twice or thrice as much as many years ago,which means that they have more chance to enjoy their life.

 

    Some people in favor of owning a privare car,they point out that it will be comfortable and convenient with a private.Because owning a private car means they don`t have to travelling to work on a crowd bus or train everyday which make them feel tired and bored.A private car can also help people enjoy a more interesting weekend or holiday,they can drive the car to a field for a picnic with their family .

 

 

   However ,other people keep a negative attitude toward afford a private car,the reason are as followed.

  First and foremost,more and more car on road will cause trafic jam inevitably .

For another,automobile exhaust do harm for our physical health,the environment will be polluted badly.

 

   To me ,there is some truth in both arguments,but i think the advantages overweigh the disadvantages.

asaro

I wrote it before.

mimi38558

how many private cars do you have? i'm poor,so i have no car. but in my plan of future ,i don't want to own a private car though it is convenient for my life.no matter where ,i always see the private car and breathe the worst air.oh,it's breathless! it's my impression of the private car.

 

 in my oppinion, high tech can change the life ,but it also change the environment around us. i desire living in the nature world more than live in the technology world. And i want to leave a wonderful world to my offspring .

yellowrainy

                                                                          Private Car

     There is an increasing trend that a large amount of people feel like possessing a private car.To some extend,it proves that our economy has gained its achievement.From my point of view,owning a private does more harm than good.Several reasons are as follows:
    About its merits: having a private car can reduce some incovinence.You don't need to go to the station to buy a ticket when you want to go somewhere a little far.Moreover,it shows that you are living under comfortable life.
    However,it also has its disavantage.First,it will cause air pollution.As we know,the poisonous gas can reduce the levl of air.Second,it may lead to traffic jam.If more and more car appears in the street,people are sure to get trouble.
Third,maintaining a private car needs much money because the price of oil is climbing.There is a saying:"It is easy to buy a car ,but hard to keep it."
   As far as I am concerned,cars enter the market is necessary as an industry, but we should make effort to reduce problems it brings.It is wise for us to consider both.

huajinghua

at present,with the development of society and economy,the private car is very common,more and more private cars come into our life,people's views on private car are different.some people think that the private car make us have a convenient vehicle,we needn't take the crowded bus.and we can take our car anywhere and anytime. but each coin have two sides,others people hold a opposite opinion,they think private cars have made so much harmful gas,and make transport more crowded,we needn't have private car everyone! when it comes to me , i think we shouldn't have private car everyone,because our environment must be clean,and the gasonline is less and less,we should save it by everyone,we can take bike,foot,and even bus,do our best to keep we and the next generation have clean gas.

gabriel18

      With the development of china economy,more and more people like to buy private car,As our country has large number of people ,we should be given deep consideration for the problem of the private car .
    Obviously,the private car can make our life more convenience.By use it we can get home from every where every time Or go anywhere not to restrict by the bus (or subway) ,It's must be wonderful of weekend picnic,classmate meeting or have a date etc.
   
    as we can been see that cars make enormous pollution to our environment,we should be sensible to against the enhance of the private car's number because the gas coming from the car engines and factories make environment polluted badly,It's best way to lead our life to take subway and by bus,or by bicycle to go to work.
    
    It's very difficult to decide that it should be necessary to enlarge the private car market?as I think that the private car of certain amount is acceptable,but,Consider for the sake of environment,we should control the quick growth of private car in a certain amount,and promote the kind of transportation by subway or bus,why? more economic and less pollution.
[ 本帖最后由 gabriel18 于 2008-4-27 21:27 编辑 ]